"The blah blah didn't just start as blah. It started as blah..." "First came blah -- blah blah blah" "And now: blah"
It's a distinctly AI writing style. I do wonder if we'll get to a point where people start writing this way just because it's what they're used to reading. Or maybe LLMs will get better at not writing like this before that happens.
I get it, I should focus just on the content and whether or not an LLM was used to write it, but the reaction to it is visceral now.
But in this case the piece is wordier than a bad human writer would be. If they want to use ai for writing, so be it, but at least include “concisely” in the prompt.