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Grammatically an emdash is fine in most places a comma is fine. It adds a bit more emphasis to the bit after the dash.

I went to the grocery store, and bought tomatoes.

I went to the grocery store---and bought a Ferrari.

The second one has a bit more of a dramatic pause.

"Eats, Shoots, and Leaves" is a fun book with a great chapter about the dash with many good examples.

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Emdashes and commas aren't interchangeable, and your example there demonstrates one great reason why. The emdash establishes a discontinuity rather than one thing flowing into another, which is why the tomatoes don't merit one but the Ferrari does: you are using the emdash to emphasize the situational irony.

Going back to Anthropic's post:

> They’re the world’s most advanced models for coding and knowledge work---and their research capabilities offer an early glimpse of how AI models will contribute to scientific progress.

The first thing directly implies and flows smoothly into the next---or would, if not for the awkward emdash. There is no discontinuity, no twist or shift in context, no implied question and provided answer, no punchline. It's just distracting.

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Your first example shouldn't have a comma at all.
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IMO it will work better in some contexts than in others. If rhythm isn't a concern then yes, it could always be omitted.
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Em dashes are commonly used to add emphasis, even where you would ordinarily use a comma. Their flexibility is why many people love them! See https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/em-dash-en-dash-how-...
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Yes, I know what an emdash is---I've been using them in my writing since long before they came to the fore of the AI writing conversation. Anthropic's use of the emdash in the fragment I quoted is clumsy and reads poorly relative to the obvious alternative, a comma.
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I didn’t mean to suggest you don’t know what an em dash is. But you said “this isn’t how you use them.” And my response is: actually, this use of them is totally fine.
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Well, I disagree! https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=49527581

It's fine in the sense that when a bad writer writes something I can usually understand what they're trying to say.

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I love em dashes because they are kind of a wildcard. When I read this same sentence, I interpret this emdash as an ellipses and not a comma.
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Language is use :)
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it got want to use em dash. but decide: do? q is if appropriate. check martian websner blog. verdict yes---emdash + comma interchangeable---proceed---judgment superficial however no desire dig deeper style irrelevant effect on reader irrelevant meter and rhythm irrelevant restate equivalence with comma established::chain unbroken::consider semicolon? consider ellipsis consider comma consider sentence break all no. preference for emdash est fiat. and all nail shapeds are for hammering.
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